Quickwrite 1

This week we had to do a quickwrite about a report on a muder with the class dino had a guy on the ground this is what i did:

Bob                                                 N.k leader


Name: Bob the dinosaur friend N.k (Not known)

Crime: Murder

Age: 64,000,000

Reported at: the jungle

Evidence:

Today has been a sad day lazerbeam has died. The crime happened on 27 of June 5:36 pm. Koka Ngaire had a hard time. Bob was caught killing lazerbeam on the table it looked like lazerbeam was trying to go get his food that he planted by a rock but Bob and his friend thats N.K  the victim looked like his leg get his left leg bit off so bob got him on the left leg and arm there was blood on the scene. It looked like that he was going to go get food but it was winter so was lazerbeam trying to kill the dinos? It looked like that the dinos came from behind so it is confirmed

Dinos are:

Quickwrite 2

We also did another quickwrite we had to do another this week this time its about a Dino eating a jar of Nutella without permission this is it:

Bob                      N.k leader

Name: Bob the dinosaur friend N.k

Crime: Eating Nutella without permission

Age: 64,000,000

Reported at: Room 2

Evidence:

We have seen that Bob was found in a nutella jar that was register to Koka Nagrie but Bobby was found in it with his face in nutella but why would he do that maybe he was very hungry so he smelled the nutella and went for a slow approach so he did suddenly he pounced on to it and clawed it so he could eat it Bob tried to lie but he fail the words he said. The evidence point to

How to write a quality blog comment

  Hi today I will be telling you how to make a quality blog comment
      1. Treat them with a gretting like: Kia ore, Nǐ hǎo
      2. Compliment the author on there work "I like...."
      3. Does the blog post remind me of somthing similar? Make a                                          connection
      4.Add more information
      5.Ask a question (or anwser a question if they asked one)
      6.Re read for sense - does my comment make sense?
      7. Check my spelling and punctuation
      8.Check with my teacher or with your family (not baby brother)
      9.  PUBLISH!

Musem trip to the Electric village

1/2 weeks ago we went to the E village/ Retro tech museum We started our journey to it.                             

                                                                       

                                                           20 minutes later....

We arrived at our destination we had a leader take us for a tour about the E vechile's like:
E motorbike, E bike and E farm bike then we talked a but how to make power with the turbines.
Next we got to go on an electric scooter and with a robot that you can control, On our way out we got to get a lollipop.Then we started our walk to the retro tech museum it was so fun that day.



                                                               To be continued mayby...