Quickwrite 1

This week we had to do a quickwrite about a report on a muder with the class dino had a guy on the ground this is what i did:

Bob                                                 N.k leader


Name: Bob the dinosaur friend N.k (Not known)

Crime: Murder

Age: 64,000,000

Reported at: the jungle

Evidence:

Today has been a sad day lazerbeam has died. The crime happened on 27 of June 5:36 pm. Koka Ngaire had a hard time. Bob was caught killing lazerbeam on the table it looked like lazerbeam was trying to go get his food that he planted by a rock but Bob and his friend thats N.K  the victim looked like his leg get his left leg bit off so bob got him on the left leg and arm there was blood on the scene. It looked like that he was going to go get food but it was winter so was lazerbeam trying to kill the dinos? It looked like that the dinos came from behind so it is confirmed

Dinos are:

Quickwrite 2

We also did another quickwrite we had to do another this week this time its about a Dino eating a jar of Nutella without permission this is it:

Bob                      N.k leader

Name: Bob the dinosaur friend N.k

Crime: Eating Nutella without permission

Age: 64,000,000

Reported at: Room 2

Evidence:

We have seen that Bob was found in a nutella jar that was register to Koka Nagrie but Bobby was found in it with his face in nutella but why would he do that maybe he was very hungry so he smelled the nutella and went for a slow approach so he did suddenly he pounced on to it and clawed it so he could eat it Bob tried to lie but he fail the words he said. The evidence point to

Quickwrite 14.11.18

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Two more minutes thats all I need mum. I need to oh... Hi I'm Bjorn, ok where was I in my story?.. Ok, it was a dark stormy night and a kid named Globe was going to save a boat 150km off the coast of New Zealand. It was a cruise ship, it had hundreds of people on it . He flew over to the crusie ship, he saw a big rock and hit it!

It was sinking really fast. He quickly lifted the boat and took it to the harbour, he waited for the shore people to say that he could come in to the harbour. He waited for everone to get off. After that he fixed the boat and put it back into the water.
It was a good save. :D